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Hmmm... I think there's something about the way I draw that just isn't suited to female bodies. I dunno... I'm not sure if she's good enough to put into the auction at Otakon. I wish I could do her better justice because I think Yoko is really awesome.

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:iconjimmpan:
50. cal... big ass gun!

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:iconsugarmadness:
I don't know what you're talking about. I think its really good. maybe she is too broad and muscular like you make your males. Just try making your females leaner. Over all I love it. ^^

P.S. That ending... wtf...?

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:iconlinkworshiper:
Gun toting babes ftw!

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:iconlinkworshiper:
Yay. I dunno.... I want to draw more Heeros and Duos D= I am too depressed to focus on this haha.

PS
Gainax yes?

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:iconjimmpan:
Oh yeah!

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:iconxcandeex:
MMMMMMMMMMM HAPPPYY!!!
:iconlinkworshiper:
YAY! I was thinking of you the entire time D=

Also I am sad my internet is being st upid. WoW lags too much to play T__T

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:iconblazechan:
I probably would of given her bigger thighs and hips. LAWL! xD I wouldn't change anything else. ... Maybe a warning at the bottom "Surgeon General's Warning: Do NOT get romantically involved. She causes death."

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:iconpyrochan-dolls:
hmm not to be the dampner on what is a pretty awesome drawing.. but you can feel your.. nervousness as it were, about drawing a female.

It almost feels like you went "SHIT BOOBS!" and forgot how to draw or something XD

You have them, I have them, don't be scared of them and the female figure.

A tip on drawing women, work more with curves and less with angles. Notice how the side of her waist curves in very dramatically below her rib cage.

Hmm I think the biggest issue you have here, is you've just aproached the drawing like a man with boobs. Women in general have smaller rib cages and curvier hips, it's not just a thinner waist and more curvy legs... actually her legs are very feminine XD

Overall I love the colours and the linework as usual is superb, you just appear a little bit scared of what you're trying to achieve.

(Mind you I'm the same with men, so I can't talk!)

((PS PLZ no one kill me for actually handing out crit. I love Link.))

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:iconlinkworshiper:
Yaaaaaaaaaaaah. I draw too many young men kissing each other 8D

HAHA, word.

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